Variant 1:
 
1836
His wizard course where hoary Derwent takes
Thro' craggs, and forest glooms, and opening lakes,
Staying his silent waves, to hear the roar
That stuns the tremulous cliffs of high Lodore:
Where silver rocks the savage prospect chear
Of giant yews that frown on Rydale's mere;

Where Derwent stops his course to hear the roar
That stuns the tremulous cliffs ...





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1827
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Variant 2:
 
1836
Where, bosom'd deep, the shy Winander peeps

Where, deep embosom'd, shy Winander peeps
1793.

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Variant 3:
 
1836
Fair scenes! with other eyes, than once, I gaze,
The ever-varying charm your round displays,
Than when, ere-while, I taught, "a happy child,"
The echoes of your rocks my carols wild:
Then did no ebb of chearfulness demand
Sad tides of joy from Melancholy's hand;

Upon the varying charm your round displays,





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Variant 4:
 
1820
... wild ...
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Variant 5:
 
1836
... stars of night,
Alike, when first the vales the bittern fills,
Or the first woodcocks roam'd the moonlight hills.

Alike, when heard the bittern's hollow bill,
Or the first woodcocks roam'd the moonlight hill.


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Variant 6:
 
1820
Return Delights! with whom my road begun,
When Life rear'd laughing up her morning sun;
When Transport kiss'd away my April tear,
"Rocking as in a dream the tedious year";
When link'd with thoughtless Mirth I cours'd the plain,




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Variant 7:
 
1836
For then, ev'n then, the little heart would beat
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Variant 8:
 
1836
And wild Impatience, panting upward, show'd
Where tipp'd with gold the mountain-summits glow'd.

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Variant 9:
 
1836
With Hope Reflexion blends her social rays
1793
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Variant 10:
 
1820
While, Memory at my side, I wander here,
Starts at the simplest sight th' unbidden tear,
A form discover'd at the well-known seat,
A spot, that angles at the riv'let's feet,
The ray the cot of morning trav'ling nigh,
And sail that glides the well-known alders by.
Only in the edition of 1793.

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Variant 11:
 
1820
To shew her yet some joys to me remain,
1793
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Variant 12:
 
1820
... with soft affection's ear,
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Variant 13:
 
1836
... with lights between;
Gazing the tempting shades to them deny'd,
When stood the shorten'd herds amid' the tide,
Where, from the barren wall's unshelter'd end,
Long rails into the shallow lake extend;

When, at the barren wall's unsheltered end,
Where long rails far into the lake extend,
Crowded the shortened herds, and beat the tides
With their quick tails, and lash'd their speckled sides;




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Variant 14:
 
1836
And round the humming elm, a glimmering scene!
In the brown park, in flocks, the troubl'd deer

... in herds, ...

1793

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Variant 15:
 
1820
When horses in the wall-girt intake stood,
Unshaded, eying far below, the flood,
Crouded behind the swain, in mute distress,
With forward neck the closing gate to press;
And long, with wistful gaze, his walk survey'd,
'Till dipp'd his pathway in the river shade;





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Variant 16:
 
1845
—Then Quiet led me up the huddling rill,
Bright'ning with water-breaks the sombrous gill;

—Then, while I wandered up the huddling rill
Brightening with water-breaks the sombrous ghyll,

Then, while I wandered where the huddling rill
Brightens with water-breaks the sombrous ghyll,

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Variant 17:
 
1820
To where, while thick above the branches close,
In dark-brown bason its wild waves repose,
Inverted shrubs, and moss of darkest green,
Cling from the rocks, with pale wood-weeds between;
Save that, atop, the subtle sunbeams shine,
On wither'd briars that o'er the craggs recline;
Sole light admitted here, a small cascade,
Illumes with sparkling foam the twilight shade.
Beyond, along the visto of the brook,
Where antique roots its bustling path o'erlook,
The eye reposes on a secret bridge
Half grey, half shagg'd with ivy to its ridge.
—Sweet rill, farewel! ...












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Variant 18:
 
1845
But see aloft the subtle sunbeams shine,
On withered briars that o'er the crags recline;
Thus beautiful! as if the sight displayed,
By its own sparkling foam that small cascade;
Inverted shrubs, with moss of gloomy green
Cling from the rocks, with pale wood-weeds between.

Inverted shrubs with pale wood weeds between
Cling from the moss-grown rocks, a darksome green,
Save where aloft the subtle sunbeams shine
And its own twilight softens the whole scene.
And sparkling as it foams a small cascade
Illumines from within the impervious shade
Below, right in the vista of the brook,
Where antique roots, etc.





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Variant 19:
 
1845
Sole light admitted here, a small cascade,
Illumes with sparkling foam the impervious shade;

1820
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Variant 20:
 
1827
... path ...
1793
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Variant 21:
 
1845
Whence hangs, in the cool shade, the listless swain
Lingering behind his disappearing wain.

1820
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Variant 22:
 
1845
—Sweet rill, ...
1793
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Variant 23:
 
1820
... and ...
1793
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Variant 24:
 
1845
And desert ...
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Variant 25:
 
1820
How pleasant, as the yellowing sun declines,
And with long rays and shades the landscape shines;
To mark the birches' stems all golden light,
That lit the dark slant woods with silvery white!
The willow's weeping trees, that twinkling hoar,
Glanc'd oft upturn'd along the breezy shore,
Low bending o'er the colour'd water, fold
Their moveless boughs and leaves like threads of gold;
The skiffs with naked masts at anchor laid,
Before the boat-house peeping thro' the shade;
Th' unwearied glance of woodman's echo'd stroke;
And curling from the trees the cottage smoke.
Their pannier'd train ...












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Variant 26:
 
1845
... zephyrs ...
1820
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Variant 27:
 This stanza was added in the edition of 1820.

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Variant 28:
  1845. This couplet was added in 1845.

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Variant 29:
 
1845
And now the universal tides repose,
And, brightly blue, the burnished mirror glows,

1820
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Variant 30:
 
1845
The sails are dropped, the poplar's foliage sleeps,
And insects clothe, like dust, the glassy deeps.

This couplet followed l. 127 from 1820 to 1843.
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Variant 31:
 
1820
Shot, down the headlong pathway darts his sledge;
1793
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Variant 32:
 
1820
Beside their shelteringi cross of wall, the flock
Feeds on in light, nor thinks of winter's shock;

Only in the edition of 1793.
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Variant 33:
 
1820
Dashed down ...
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Variant 34:
 
1836
... verdant ...
1793
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Variant 35:
 
1820
Gazed by ...
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Variant 36:
 
1836
... his warrior head.
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Variant 37:
 
1836
... haggard ...
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Variant 38:
 
1836
Whose state, like pine-trees, waving to and fro,
Droops, and o'er canopies his regal brow,

This couplet was inserted in the editions 1793 to 1832.
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Variant 39:
 
1820
... blows ...
1793
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Variant 40:
 This couplet was first printed in the edition of 1820.

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Variant 41:
 
1836
Bright'ning the cliffs between where sombrous pine,
And yew-trees ...

1793
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Variant 42:
 
1836
How busy the enormous hive within,
1793
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Variant 43:
 
1836
... with the ...
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Variant 44:
 
1836
Some hardly heard their chissel's clinking sound,
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Variant 45:
 
1836
... th' aëreal ...
1793
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Variant 46:
 
1815
... viewless ...
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Variant 47:
 
1836
Glad from their airy baskets hang and sing.
1793
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Variant 48:
 
1836
Hung o'er a cloud, above the steep that rears
1793