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Variant 49:
 
1820
It's ...
1793
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Variant 50:
 
1845
And now it touches on the purple steep
That flings his shadow on the pictur'd deep.

That flings its image ...

And now the sun has touched the purple steep
Whose softened image penetrates the deep.

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Variant 51:
 
1836
The coves ...
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Variant 52:
 
1836
The gilded turn arrays in richer green
Each speck of lawn the broken rocks between;

... invests with richer green

1793

1820
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Variant 53:
 
1827
... boles ...
1793
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Variant 54:
 
1827
... in ...
1793
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Variant 55:
 
1836
That, barking busy 'mid the glittering rocks,
Hunts, where he points, the intercepted flocks;

1793
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Variant 56:
 
1845
The Druid stonesii their lighted fane unfold,

... a burnished ring unfold;
1793

1836
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Variant 57:
 
1827
... sinks ...
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Variant 58:
 
1845
In these lone vales, if aught of faith may claim,
Thin silver hairs, and ancient hamlet fame;
When up the hills, as now, retreats the light,
Strange apparitions mock the village sight.

In these secluded vales, if village fame,
Confirmed by silver hairs, belief may claim;
When up the hills, as now, retired the light,
Strange apparitions mocked the gazer's sight.

... shepherd's sight.



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Variant 59:
 
1836
A desperate form appears, that spurs his steed,
Along the midway cliffs with violent speed;

1793
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Variant 60:
 
1836
Anon, in order mounts a gorgeous show
Of horsemen shadows winding to and fro;

1793
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Variant 61:
  This line was added in 1820.

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Variant 62:
 
1820
... is gilt with evening's beam,
1793
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Variant 63:
 
1849
... of the ...
1836
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Variant 64:
 
1836
Lost gradual o'er the heights in pomp they go,
While silent stands th' admiring vale below;
Till, but the lonely beacon all is fled,
That tips with eve's last gleam his spiry head. .

Till, save the lonely beacon, ...



1793

1820
In the edition of 1836 the seven lines of the printed text—205-211—replaced these four lines of the editions 1793-1832.

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Variant 65:
 
1836
On red slow-waving pinions ...
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Variant 66:
 
1820
And, fronting the bright west in stronger lines,
The oak its dark'ning boughs and foliage twines,

1793
The edition of 1815 omitted this couplet. It was restored in its final form in the edition of 1820.

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Variant 67:
 
1836
I love beside the glowing lake to stray,

How pleasant near the tranquil lake to stray,
1793

1815
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Variant 68:
 
1836
... to stray,
Where winds the road along the secret bay;
By rills that tumble down the woody steeps,
And run in transport to the dimpling deeps;
Along the "wild meand'ring shore" to view,
Obsequious Grace the winding swan pursue.

... a secret bay;

... meandering shore" ...





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Variant 69:
 
1836
He swells his lifted chest, and backward flings
His bridling neck between his tow'ring wings;
Stately, and burning in his pride, divides
And glorying looks around, the silent tides:
On as he floats, the silver'd waters glow,
Proud of the varying arch and moveless form of snow.

... his towering wings;
In all the majesty of ease divides,





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Variant 70:
 
1845
... her beauty's pride
Forgets, unweary'd watching every side,
She calls them near, and with affection sweet
Alternately relieves their weary feet;



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Variant 71:
 
1836
Long may ye roam these hermit waves that sleep,
In birch-besprinkl'd cliffs embosom'd deep;
These fairy holms untrodden, still, and green,
Whose shades protect the hidden wave serene;
Whence fragrance scents the water's desart gale,
The violet, and theiii lily of the vale; .

Long may ye float upon these floods serene;
Yours be these holms untrodden, still, and green,
Whose leafy shades fence off the blustering gale,
Where breathes in peace the lily of the vale.





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Variant 72:
 
1820
Where, tho' her far-off twilight ditty steal,
They not the trip of harmless milkmaid feel.

1793
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Variant 73:
 
1836
Yon tuft conceals your home, your cottage bow'r.
Fresh water rushes strew the verdant floor;

Yon isle conceals ...

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Variant 74:
 
1836
Thence issuing oft, unwieldly as ye stalk,
Ye crush with broad black feet your flow'ry walk;

Thence issuing often with unwieldly stalk,
With broad black feet ye crush your flow'ry walk;

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Variant 75:
 
1820
Safe from your door ye hear at breezy morn,
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Variant 76:
 
1836
... and mellow horn;
At peace inverted your lithe necks ye lave,
With the green bottom strewing o'er the wave;
No ruder sound your desart haunts invades,
Than waters dashing wild, or rocking shades.
Ye ne'er, like hapless human wanderers, throw
Your young on winter's winding sheet of snow.

... and mellow horn;
Involve your serpent necks in changeful rings,
Rolled wantonly between your slippery wings,
Or, starting up with noise and rude delight,
Force half upon the wave your cumbrous flight.






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Variant 77:
 
1836
Fair Swan! by all a mother's joys caress'd,
Haply some wretch has ey'd, and call'd thee bless'd;
Who faint, and beat by summer's breathless ray,
Hath dragg'd her babes along this weary way;
While arrowy fire extorting feverish groans
Shot stinging through her stark o'er labour'd bones.
—With backward gaze, lock'd joints, and step of pain,
Her seat scarce left, she strives, alas! in vain,
To teach their limbs along the burning road
A few short steps to totter with their load,
Shakes her numb arm that slumbers with its weight,
And eyes through tears the mountain's shadeless height;
And bids her soldier come her woes to share,
Asleep on Bunker'siv charnel hill afar;
For hope's deserted well why wistful look?
Chok'd is the pathway, and the pitcher broke.















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In 1793 this passage occupied the place of the six lines of the final text (250-255).


... and called thee bless'd;
The whilst upon some sultry summer's day
She dragged her babes along this weary way;
Or taught their limbs along the burning road
A few short steps to totter with their load.

The while ...




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Variant 78:
 
1845
... a shooting star ...
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Variant 79:
 
1845
I hear, while in the forest depth he sees,
The Moon's fix'd gaze between the opening trees,
In broken sounds her elder grief demand,
And skyward lift, like one that prays, his hand,
If, in that country, where he dwells afar,
His father views that good, that kindly star;
—Ah me! all light is mute amid the gloom,
The interlunar cavern of the tomb.

In broken sounds her elder child demand,
While toward the sky he lifts his pale bright hand,

—Alas! all light ...







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1836

1836
Those eight lines were withdrawn in 1845.

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Variant 80:
 
1836
... painful ...
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Variant 81:
 
1820
The distant clock forgot, and chilling dew,
Pleas'd thro' the dusk their breaking smiles to view,

Only in the edition of 1793.
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Variant 82:
 
1836
... on her lap to play
Delighted, with the glow-worm's harmless ray
Toss'd light from hand to hand; while on the ground
Small circles of green radiance gleam around.



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Variant 83:
 
1836
Oh! when the bitter showers her path assail,
And roars between the hills the torrent gale,

... sleety showers ...

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Variant 84:
 
1827
Scarce heard, their chattering lips her shoulder chill,
And her cold back their colder bosoms thrill;
All blind she wilders o'er the lightless heath,
Led by Fear's cold wet hand, and dogg'd by Death;
Death, as she turns her neck the kiss to seek,
Breaks off the dreadful kiss with angry shriek.
Snatch'd from her shoulder with despairing moan,
She clasps them at that dim-seen roofless stone.—
"Now ruthless Tempest launch thy deadliest dart!
Fall fires—but let us perish heart to heart."









1793
The first, third, and fourth of these couplets were omitted from the edition of 1820. The whole passage was withdrawn in 1827.

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Variant 85:
 
1820
Soon shall the Light'ning hold before thy head
His torch, and shew them slumbering in their bed,

Only in the edition of 1793.
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Variant 86:
 
1820
While, by the scene compos'd, the breast subsides,
Nought wakens or disturbs it's tranquil tides;
Nought but the char that for the may-fly leaps,
And breaks the mirror of the circling deeps;
Or clock, that blind against the wanderer born
Drops at his feet, and stills his droning horn.
—The whistling swain that plods his ringing way
Where the slow waggon winds along the bay;
The sughv of swallow flocks that twittering sweep,
The solemn curfew swinging long and deep;
The talking boat that moves with pensive sound,
Or drops his anchor down with plunge profound;
Of boys that bathe remote the faint uproar,
And restless piper wearying out the shore;
These all to swell the village murmurs blend,
That soften'd from the water-head descend.
While in sweet cadence rising small and still
The far-off minstrels of the haunted hill,
As the last bleating of the fold expires,
Tune in the mountain dells their water lyres.



















Only in the edition of 1793.
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Variant 87:
 
1845
... of the night;
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Variant 88:
 
1815
Thence, from three paly loopholes mild and small,
Slow lights upon the lake's still bosom fall,

1793
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Variant 89:
 
1827
Beyond the mountain's giant reach that hides
In deep determin'd gloom his subject tides.
—Mid the dark steeps repose the shadowy streams,
As touch'd with dawning moonlight's hoary gleams,
Long streaks of fairy light the wave illume
With bordering lines of intervening gloom,





1793
The second and third of these couplets were cancelled in the edition of 1815, and the whole passage was withdrawn in 1827.

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Variant 90:
 
1836
Soft o'er the surface creep the lustres pale
Tracking with silvering path the changeful gale.

... those lustres pale
Tracking the fitful motions of the gale.

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