[163] The fifty new churches.—Pope.
[164] This seems imitated from Hopkins' Court Prospect:
Cowley's Somerset House:
Whitehall is just above that circular sweep of the Thames in the midst of which the cities of London and Westminster unite. Pope wrote in the belief that the magnificent design of Inigo Jones for the palace at Whitehall would one day be executed.
[165] Addison's translation of a passage in Claudian on the imperial palace at Rome:
[166] "Once more," as in the renowned reign of Elizabeth.—Holt White.
After holding out a prospect of perpetual peace, Pope conjures up a future vision of "sueing kings," and "suppliant states," which are the consequences of war and victory.
[167] This return to the trees of Windsor Forest, his original subject, is masterly and judicious; and the whole speech of Thames is highly animated and poetical,—forcible and rich in diction, as it is copious and noble in imagery.—Bowles.
[168] Originally thus:
The original lines were rejected, probably as too nearly resembling a passage in Comus:
[169] Pope has written "if obscure?" against this line in the manuscript. It is plain he meant that the trees were converted into ships, but the language is extravagant.
[170] The red cross upon the Union Jack.
[171] Waller's verses on Tea:
[172] "To tempt the sea" is a classical expression, significant of hazard and resolution. Dryden's Iliad:
[173] "Exalt" is an inefficient and prosaic word.—Wakefield.
The word is certainly not "prosaic," for no one in prose would talk of exalting a sail, but it is "inefficient," just because it is one of those deviations from common speech, which sound affected.
[174] The whole passage seems a grand improvement from Philips' Cider, book ii.:
Pope also drew upon Addison's lines to William III.:
Towards the close of 1712 Tickell published his poem on the Prospect of Peace. "The description," Pope wrote to Caryll, "of the several parts of the world in regard to our trade has interfered with some lines of my own in Windsor Forest, though written before I saw his. I transcribe both, and desire your sincere judgment whether I ought not to strike out mine, either as they seem too like his, or as they are inferior." The close resemblance arose from their having copied a common original. The couplet of Pope on the West India islands, which he subsequently omitted, has no counterpart in Tickell, because it was not derived from the passage in Addison.
[175] In poetical philosophy the crude material from which jewels and the precious metals were formed, was supposed to be ripened into maturity by the sun. Tickell has the same idea:
[176] This was suggested by a couplet of Denham's on the same subject in his Cooper's Hill:
[177] A wish that London may be made a free Port.—Pope.
[178] This resembles Waller in his panegyric on Cromwell:
[179] Better in the first edition, "Whose naked youth," and in the Miscellanies better still, "While naked youth."—Wakefield.
[180] "Admire" was formerly applied to anything which excited surprise, whether the surprise was coupled with commendation or censure, or was simply a sentiment of wonder. Thus Milton, using the word in this last sense, says, Par. Lost, i. 690:
"Admire" has the same signification in Windsor Forest. Pope means that the savages would be astonished at "our speech, our colour, and our strange attire," and not that they would admire them in our present laudatory sense of the term, which would be contrary to the fact. "A fair complexion," says Adam Smith, "is a shocking deformity upon the coast of Guinea. Thick lips and a flat nose are a beauty."
[181] As Peru was particularly famous for its long succession of Incas, and Mexico for many magnificent works of massy gold, there is great propriety in fixing the restoration of the grandeur of each to that object for which each was once so remarkable.—Warton.
[182] Rage in Virgil is bound in "brazen bonds," and Envy is tormented by "the snakes of Ixion." These coincidences are specified by Wakefield.
[183] Sir J. Beaumont's Bosworth Field:
[184] Hor., Ode iii. lib. 3:
Addison's translation of Horace's Ode:
Pope says that he will not presume "to touch on Albion's golden days," and "bring the scenes of opening fate to light," oblivious that the speech which Father Thames has just delivered is entirely made up of these two topics. As might be inferred from their feebleness, the lines from ver. 426 formed part of the original Windsor Forest, with the exception of the couplet beginning "Where Peace descending," which is of another order of poetry. The second line is exquisite.
[185] He adopted one or two hints, and especially the turn of the compliment to Lord Lansdowne, from the conclusion of Addison's Letter to Lord Halifax:
[186] It is observable that our author finishes this poem with the first line of his Pastorals, as Virgil closed his Georgics with the first line of his Eclogues. The preceding couplet scarcely rises to mediocrity, and seems modelled from Dryden's version of the passage imitated:
The conclusion is feeble and flat. The whole should have ended with the speech of Thames.—Warton.