[469:1] First published in 1834. The date of composition cannot be ascertained. The MS., an early if not a first draft, is certainly of late date. The water-marks of the paper (Bath Post) are 1822 and 1828. There is a second draft (MS. b) of lines 97-112. Line 37, 'Dan Ovid's mazy tale of loves,' may be compared with line 100 of The Garden of Boccaccio, 'Peers Ovid's Holy Book of Love's sweet smart,' and it is probable that Alice Du Clos was written about the same time, 1828-9. In line 91 'Ellen' is no doubt a slip of the pen for 'Alice'.
Title] Alice Du Clos: or &c. MS.
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Maiden white | ||
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face half drooping |
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Go tell him I am well at home MS. erased.
speed] fly MS. erased.
stronger] sweeter MS. erased.
gentler] lovelier MS. erased.
reel'd] pass'd MS. erased.
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huge and dark |
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the Lightning flash |
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as it falls off from a Bark |
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| Toil'd in the deep Sea-trough | |||
shouldering] wheeling MS. erased.
A moment's pause MS. erased.
lightsome] glittering MS.
With] The MS.
Lord Julian in the Greenwood stays MS. erased.
With buskins and with quiver MS. erased.
huntsmen] huntsman MS. b.
He sought in vain twixt shame and pride MS. b.
He look'd far round MS. b.
sore] sair MS. b, MS. erased.
Tho' names too seldom MS. b.
With all his gay hunt round MS.
When] And MS.
And dark of Brow, without a word MS.
stifled] muttering MS. erased.
And Look askance MS.: Yet not unheard MS. erased.
| God's wrath! speak out! |
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Lord Julian cry'd What mean'st thou man? |
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Recoiling with a start Cried Julian with a start. |
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well-feign'd anger feign'd resentment blunt and rude |
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| Sir Hugh his deep revenge pursued | |||
| Why scowl at me? Command my skill. | |||
She bade me tell you MS. erased.
For as she clos'd her scoffing phrase MS. erased.
1828.
[475:1] First published in 1828: included in the Amulet, 1833, as the first of 'Three Scraps', and in 1852. The present text is that of the Amulet, 1833.
Title] The Alienated Mistress: A Madrigal (From an unfinished Melodrama) 1828, 1852.
Ah faithless nymph 1828, 1852.
call] name 1828, 1852.
seem'd] was 1828, 1852.
caught] took 1828, 1852.
? 1825.
[476:1] First published in Friendship's Offering, 1834, as No. III of 'Lightheartednesses in Rhyme': included in 1834.
Title] To a Comic Author on an abusive review of his Aristophanes MS.
1 foll.
kept] kept F. O. 1834.
1828.
[477:1] First published in Friendship's Offering, 1834, as No. IV of 'Lightheartednesses in Rhyme'. It follows the lines 'On my joyful Departure', &c., and is headed 'Expectoration the Second'. First collected in 1834.
[477:2] Köhln Coln F. O. The German Name of Cologne. F. O.]
[477:3] Of the eleven thousand virgin Martyrs. F. O.
[477:4] As Necessity is the mother of Invention, and extremes beget each other, the facts above recorded may explain how this ancient town (which, alas! as sometimes happens with venison, has been kept too long), came to be the birthplace of the most fragrant of spirituous fluids, the Eau de Cologne. F. O.
1828.
[477:5] First published in Friendship's Offering, 1834, with the heading 'An Expectoration, or Splenetic Extempore, on my joyful departure from the City of Cologne'. First collected in 1834.
[477:6] As I am Rhymer, F. O., P. W., 1834, 1893. The 'a' is inserted by Coleridge on a page of F. O., 1834; the correction was not adopted in P. W., 1834.
[477:7] The apotheosis of Rhenish wine.
1828.
[478:1] First published in The Keepsake for 1829, to accompany a plate by Stothard: included in 1829 and 1834. The variant of lines 49-56, probably a fragment of some earlier unprinted poem, is inserted in one of Coleridge's Notebooks.
[478:2] Mrs. Gillman.
[480:1] Boccaccio claimed for himself the glory of having first introduced the works of Homer to his countrymen.
[480:2] I know few more striking or more interesting proofs of the overwhelming influence which the study of the Greek and Roman classics exercised on the judgments, feelings, and imaginations of the literati of Europe at the commencement of the restoration of literature, than the passage in the Filocopo of Boccaccio, where the sage instructor, Racheo, as soon as the young prince and the beautiful girl Biancofiore had learned their letters, sets them to study the Holy Book, Ovid's Art of Love. 'Incominciò Racheo a mettere il suo [officio] in esecuzione con intera sollecitudine. E loro, in breve tempo, insegnato a conoscer le lettere, fece leggere il santo libro d'Ovvidio, [!! S. T. C.] nel quale il sommo poeta mostra, come i santi fuochi di Venere si debbano ne' freddi cuori con sollecitudine accendere.' ['Deeply interesting—but observe, p. 63, ll. 33-5 [loc. cit.], The holy Book—Ovid's Art of Love!! This is not the result of mere Immorality:—
MS. note on the fly-leaf of S. T. C.'s copy of vol. i of Boccaccio's Opere, 1723.
all] all Keepsake, 1829.
vestal] vestal Keepsake, 1829.
1829.
[481:1] First published in The Keepsake for 1830: included in P. W., 1834, iii. 381. An MS. version was forwarded to W. Sotheby in an unpublished letter of July 12, 1829. A second MS., dated July 1, 1829, is inscribed in an album now in the Editor's possession, which belonged to Miss Emily Trevenen (the author of Little Derwent's Breakfast, 1839). With regard to the variant of ll. 24-6, vide infra, Coleridge writes (Letter of July 12, 1829):—'They were struck out by the author, not because he thought them bad lines in themselves (quamvis Delia Cruscam fortasse nimis redolere videantur), but because they diverted and retarded the stream of the thought, and injured the organic unity of the composition. Più nel uno is Francesco de Sallez' brief and happy definition of the beautiful, and the shorter the poem the more indispensable is it that the Più should not overlay the Uno, that the unity should be evident. But to sacrifice the gratification, the sting of pleasure, from a fine passage to the satisfaction, the sense of complacency arising from the contemplation of a symmetrical Whole is among the last conquests achieved by men of genial powers.'
Title] Lines in a Lady's Album in answer to her question respecting the accomplishments most desirable in the Mistress or Governess of a Preparatory School Letter, July 1829: The Poet's Answer, To a Lady's Question respecting the accomplishments most desirable in an instructress of Children Keepsake, 1830.